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Page 7: Being throrough

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UPDATE: Thank you :iconblazingcoral: for pointing out that I'd forgotten Ink Smudge's ink stains. I corrected that :).

Yay for another random pony in panel 2. I threw her in to make the college campus feel populated, instead of barren.

Wow, these past two days have been BUSY! I've had to work hard again, but I still made it! Now that I'm accomplished some stuff, maybe I'd be able to do this comic in an unrushed manner. However, I am improving in my speed. And getting better use of the program. Maybe some art improvement will be reflected in this comic sometime soon, ha ha.

Have a good day, everyone, comment below!
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Another good page! I like the expressions in the last two panels.

For the background ponies (or foreground pony, in this case), you may want to dull their colors or blur them or something to make sure the viewer's eye is still drawn to the main characters there. I'm not 100% sure what would suit your style best, but I'm certain you'll be able to figure something out as you keep working. The best way to learn how to make comics is to make them, of course.